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#2959095 New in Town

Posted by WeiryWriter on 10 September 2013 - 03:12 PM in Hotel District

Delissia seemed to have accepted his apology, That's good. It would set a bad precedent if I offended the first two people I met here. The thought brought the enigmatic Cell back to his thoughts. Who is she? What was she hiding? So many unanswered questions... I hope we meet each other again, however unlikely that would be.

He brought his attention back to Delissia just in time to hear her suggestion to meet just after breakfast. "That is an agreeable time for me as well, Lady Delissia." Warren place a subtle emphasis on the word "lady," partly to show her he could remember to be polite but mostly to imprint the need for the word in his mind. "I look forward to it."

I should bring this conversation to a conclusion before I offend her again. "Now I am sure you are a busy woman, I don't want to distract you from your duties today, at least anymore than I already have," he smiled, "I hope you have an enjoyable and productive day." Hopefully she finds that acceptable...

#2959016 New in Town

Posted by WeiryWriter on 03 September 2013 - 02:28 PM in Hotel District

As Delissia spoke it was obvious to Warren that she was flustered, though she did a fair job in concealing it. Was it something I said? Did I offend her in some way? He quickly ran through the conversation thus far in his mind. Her name you fool! You used her name! See this is why you shouldn’t be the one doing this. Marlon should be here instead.

Anxious to soothe her he began, “Please excuse my use of your given name Lady Arnell. I am still growing accustomed to life among such noble ladies as yourself. Belinsk is very much a backwater when compared to Luthadel and admittedly even there I was rather uncouth.” Hopefully I’m not laying it on to thick, but I do not want to offend her. She could be my gateway into Luthadel society…

“Pardon me but I am still learning my way around the city. Could you, perhaps, give me directions to Kenton Street?” As an afterthought he continues, “Also what time would you prefer to meet?”

#2958833 New in Town

Posted by WeiryWriter on 02 June 2013 - 01:45 AM in Hotel District

"I don't know," Warren replied, "Though I expect it would be a boring." Burning tin he could still make out Cell as she hurried down the street away from Delissia and himself. He stared after her for a moment before he realized he should pay attention to the woman still in his company, not the one who had left it. "So, Delissia. Where do you suggest we meet for our tour of the city?" Warren believed it would be more polite for her to decide such a thing, he didn't want to be too great an imposition

#2958826 New in Town

Posted by WeiryWriter on 29 May 2013 - 07:35 PM in Hotel District

"Ball?" Warren began, somewhat confused. "Ah, yes. The... Elariel? Ball. Of course." He blushed slightly at the effusive praise that Delissia was directing towards him, unused as he was to such attention back home. I guess I chose the right date out of thin air. He glanced over at Cell, who gave the distinct impression that she wanted to get away, and felt a twinge of guilt. I didn't mean to make her so uncomfortable... I was just curious. Delissia though seems to be knowledgeable about the current state of affairs, which I desperately need. So, do I settle my curiousity? Or do I bow to the needs of my house?

He sighed inwardly. The House. "I would be delighted to escort you on your errands, Miss Arnell," Warren said, a tight smile on his face, before addressing Cell, "My only regret is that you will be unable to join us. Perhaps we will meet again?" Hopefully...

#2958802 New in Town

Posted by WeiryWriter on 20 May 2013 - 07:59 PM in Hotel District

"How unfortunate for you. It is a shame you can't spend more time exploring the city you seem so interested in," Warren paused for a moment, wondering how he could acheive the outcome he desired. Marlon should never have sent me here, he is the one that excells at this sort of thing. Wait, she only said most of her free time. So she should have some time for a tour during a reasonable hour. "Do you have no time availiable during the day at all? I might be able to reshuffle my appointments. I really would appreciate finding out more about this... great city." And figure you out as well Miss Cell.

Not wanting to exclude Delissia from the conversation he turned to her and said, "And when, perchance, would you be avaliable?"