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The Lord Ruler's perfect capital city, Luthadel, is doing the impossible: rebelling. Skaa half-breeds are being taught the power of Allomancy, something that the Lord Ruler's obligators said only existed in the nobility. The enslaved skaa, with their murderous benefactor, now fight back against a living god's oppression.

So, the Inquisition was formed. The nobles begin to fear assassination from all sides. The times of nobility Mistborn killing each other are over. The Steel Inquisitors look for aristocrat traitors and insurgent skaa, and the skaa try with all their strength to merely survive. The Lord Ruler's perfect Final Empire is slowly devolving into chaos.

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#21 Mailliw73

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Posted 04 January 2014 - 04:47 AM

I'll try to get one done tomorrow now.
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#22 Tal Spektor

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Skaa

Posted 22 January 2014 - 07:16 PM

Do you remember "Running out of Options" needs you?
Just checking, since you do not have it on your list.


And can you clarify to me what progress I need to do on Coralle?
Is an insane A.I.

#23 Comatose


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Posted 23 January 2014 - 02:01 AM

Updated.

I'm gonna be pretty busy for the next week or so, so don't expect any progress for the next while, and maybe I'll surprise you.

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#24 Eclipse

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5th Tier Elariel

Posted 12 February 2014 - 02:42 AM

Hey again, I have a few more things to add to the list (It's getting really long!)

You can take the House Urvon workshop post off the list, but add the House Urvon application.

Also add Turnol's workshop application, and Bernard Urvon's workshop application.

Lastly, I think it's your turn to post in the Daydreams of Starlight thread.

Thanks for everything!

---Eclipse---

Player Characters:


Nobles:

Votir Zerrung, Bernard Urvon, Celestine Beliveaux


Skaa:

Avyn, Turnol, Lock(WIP)


Obligators:

Bertram Urvon(WIP)


In the Works:

Bastian Urvon: Mistborn

Astor Urvon:Urvon Heir

Trenton Urvon


#25 Comatose


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 12:36 AM

EDITED!

I took Kler and Coralle Cobalt off the list. I'll put Coralle back on once Tal has finished with the edits she said she was preparing in the App thread, and I also took of Kler, because I read him and had nothing else to suggest. I'll do Turnol after supper some time hopefully.

I'm on a break week this week, so I'm going to try to get as much of my to do list done as possible.

EDIT and UPDATE: I will now be removing applications and workshop posts from my list as soon as I reply to them. Some recent confusion with a character application (sorry Tal), had made me realize that if I don't do this, I'll miss things even if they are on my list, as I might assume I made the last move when I really did not. So, to sum things up, if you see your thing on here, I am still getting to it, but if it is gone and it needs my attention, you can repost it.

Also, it would be great if when you post about something I have reviewed before if you could direct me to the specific portions of your application you have edited.

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#26 Mailliw73

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Posted 17 February 2014 - 02:10 AM

Hey, thanks for reading my stuff! Would you mind taking a look at Rasdons app in the workshop?
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#27 Comatose


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Posted 17 February 2014 - 06:29 AM

Done! Remember to provide a link if possible in the future, as it saves me a lot of time hunting things down :)

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#28 Chautauquan

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Posted 17 February 2014 - 06:46 AM

I recognize you've just cleaned your plate, and nothing's more relieving than to have a clean slate, and I hope not to be a terrible bother, but could I trouble you for a look-over of Ricket?

http://mistbornrpg.1...ic/1300-ricket/

#29 Comatose


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Posted 17 February 2014 - 07:27 AM

My comments are submitted. Great application, and thanks for the link.

NOTE FOR PEOPLE REPOSTING THINGS I HAVE ALREADY LOOKED AT:
Please let me know what exactly you edited, and please don't repost here until significant changes have been made, so that me spending some time rereading and commenting on it will actually do some good. I want to try to keep this list shorter in the future, and I think this is one way you guys can help me do that.

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#30 Mailliw73

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Posted 19 February 2014 - 03:47 AM

So, on Ras, I've clarified his tic disorder and added the RP sample. Would you mindchecking it out again?
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#31 Eclipse

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5th Tier Elariel

Posted 19 February 2014 - 03:53 AM

I added Bernard's RP sample, but besides that his app is the same. If his sample doesnt have any problems i'll post his final app for approval.

---Eclipse---

Player Characters:


Nobles:

Votir Zerrung, Bernard Urvon, Celestine Beliveaux


Skaa:

Avyn, Turnol, Lock(WIP)


Obligators:

Bertram Urvon(WIP)


In the Works:

Bastian Urvon: Mistborn

Astor Urvon:Urvon Heir

Trenton Urvon


#32 Mailliw73

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Posted 20 February 2014 - 10:57 PM

I just remembered, when you have sometime, would you start the next thread with Daphne, Wilor and Delve?
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#33 Zincell


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Posted 27 February 2014 - 04:12 PM

Could you check on Lau's character app?

#34 Eclipse

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5th Tier Elariel

Posted 05 March 2014 - 04:29 AM

I think its your turn to post in the Daydreams of Starlight thread, so if you could do that when you have the time, that'd be great!

---Eclipse---

Player Characters:


Nobles:

Votir Zerrung, Bernard Urvon, Celestine Beliveaux


Skaa:

Avyn, Turnol, Lock(WIP)


Obligators:

Bertram Urvon(WIP)


In the Works:

Bastian Urvon: Mistborn

Astor Urvon:Urvon Heir

Trenton Urvon


#35 Tal Spektor

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Skaa

Posted 07 March 2014 - 03:25 PM

The keep still needs more revising, but I would rather you concentrate on the diplomacy and all that.

http://mistbornrpg.1...20#entry2960989

Edited by Tal Spektor, 07 March 2014 - 03:26 PM.

Is an insane A.I.

#36 Lanscaper

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Steward in Training

Posted 27 March 2014 - 05:32 PM

Just a friendly reminder for when you get the chance:

Open threads with Winston and Jonesi:

Ancient's Whisperting - Jonesi and Felicity.

Testing the Fit - Winston and Emilia's second encounter.

Player Characters:

Noblemen: Winston Elariel

Skaa: Jonesi | Pipes

Work in Progress: Martin Meson - De Facto House Lord, Marcus Meson - House Heir, Jimmi - Foreman in Training, NeeSun - Kandra of a Thousand Minds, Zulo - Keeper of Forgotten Foods


#37 Eclipse

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5th Tier Elariel

Posted 25 December 2014 - 03:29 AM

Could you take a look at Trenton Urvon's WIP app in the workshop when you get the time?
Thanks!

---Eclipse---

Player Characters:


Nobles:

Votir Zerrung, Bernard Urvon, Celestine Beliveaux


Skaa:

Avyn, Turnol, Lock(WIP)


Obligators:

Bertram Urvon(WIP)


In the Works:

Bastian Urvon: Mistborn

Astor Urvon:Urvon Heir

Trenton Urvon


#38 Eclipse

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5th Tier Elariel

Posted 02 January 2015 - 03:12 PM

When you get the chance could you check out Trenton Urvon's final App, Astor Urvon's new WIP draft, and Lock's final app?

Thanks!

---Eclipse---

Player Characters:


Nobles:

Votir Zerrung, Bernard Urvon, Celestine Beliveaux


Skaa:

Avyn, Turnol, Lock(WIP)


Obligators:

Bertram Urvon(WIP)


In the Works:

Bastian Urvon: Mistborn

Astor Urvon:Urvon Heir

Trenton Urvon


#39 MozytheHealer

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Posted 02 January 2015 - 06:43 PM

I shall just casually jump on this small bandwagon and be like HEEEEY look! I have an app! I even linked you to it :{D And that one thread that I can't remember the name of with Liss. None of these are all that pressing, but yeah. I have reminded you like you asked in the Cbox. :{D

PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#40 Haelbarde

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Posted 05 January 2015 - 02:50 AM

Maybe I'll jump in here too.

If you get the time at all, I managed to get two apps finished! When you have time, if you could direct your attention to here or here, that'd be greatly appreciated!

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