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Ranee Planning

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#1 Mailliw73

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Posted 22 February 2014 - 06:42 PM

So this is for Mozy and I to discuss Ranee's development.

Edited by Mailliw73, 27 February 2014 - 03:15 AM.

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-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#2 MozytheHealer

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Posted 22 February 2014 - 06:58 PM

:{D

I'm going to start off with a dice roll for some stuff. Should I go with just attributes or allomantic ability as well?

PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#3 Mailliw73

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Posted 22 February 2014 - 07:17 PM

Either/Or. If you want her to have some Allomancy, go for it. I'm not too picky about what she has.
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#4 MozytheHealer

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Posted 22 February 2014 - 11:44 PM

Behold the roll stats I got for her:

Lurcher

Social Skills: Improved

Combat Ability: Weak

Resources: Superior

Allomantic Skill: Typical

It seems to work for her character pretty well. You agree maybe?

PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#5 Mailliw73

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Posted 23 February 2014 - 07:07 AM

Sounds good! :) Have fun with her.
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#6 Tal Spektor

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Posted 23 February 2014 - 06:33 PM

Will, this means Iron will have two lurchers.

Which reminds me to work on Kyne.

Edited by Tal Spektor, 23 February 2014 - 07:19 PM.

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#7 Mailliw73

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Posted 23 February 2014 - 08:49 PM

Oh yeah. That's not too bad. It actually fits perfectly. Iron-Lurchers. ;) okay, is that her name? And did you decide on a position in Iron? Lookout?
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#8 Tal Spektor

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 02:33 AM

I think so.
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#9 MozytheHealer

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 02:44 AM

Is there an age-range that Ranee should be in? Also, Tal, we should figure out some way for them to be friends? Close acquaintances? As they're both lurchers.

PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#10 Tal Spektor

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 02:54 AM

Why, they can only draw each other into hugs, not push away. ;)


I do not know how. But... Kyne is not very fond of her powers. She avoids using them as much as she can.
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#11 Mailliw73

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 09:34 PM

I don't care what age she is in. Since you wanted her to be the youngest Corporal, I'd say 19-20ish.

Besides being Lurchers, they're both in the same platoon and so will work together and be around each other a lot.
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#12 MozytheHealer

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Posted 24 February 2014 - 11:51 PM

Alrighty!

I know that they'll know each other. I was just thinking that since they'll both be lurchers, it might be more than just a leader/minion working relationship.

PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#13 Mailliw73

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Posted 25 February 2014 - 12:19 AM

They could be. It's up to you two. Tal has said that she wouldn't be boasting about her Allomancy and hates iron, so I'm not quite sure who would know about her Lurcherness. Ras for sure and then Tal can decide who else should know.

Also, do you guys have any suggestions for the name of the Crew?

Edited by Mailliw73, 25 February 2014 - 03:54 AM.

-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#14 MozytheHealer

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Posted 25 February 2014 - 04:27 AM

Alright. I have one small(super tiny) essay to write, and then I will get started on Ranee. I might be a bit slower than normal(for me) since I've finally gotten going with Gisela, and I have to switch gears, but I'll try to get some stuff done. :{D

I'm terrible at coming up with names.

Edit: Did you have a range of time that Ranee's been part of the crew?

Edited by MozytheHealer, 25 February 2014 - 05:47 AM.

PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#15 Tal Spektor

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Posted 25 February 2014 - 06:04 AM

Ranee (I always read it Renee) would know, as platoon leader. Due to a certain love-hate (or rather power-chronic-illness) relationship Kyne has with iron, she always keeps some on her, but very rarely uses it.
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#16 Mailliw73

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Posted 25 February 2014 - 10:16 PM

Okay, so Ranee knows. Now that I think about it, Iron will also need a Smoker for these two.

No, she just needs to have been part of the crew for at least threeish years I think, so that she could rise to Corporal.
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#17 MozytheHealer

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Posted 25 February 2014 - 10:21 PM

It'll be three years, then. She'll operate on her own after she leaves Talia's crew, and then would she get spotted by Ras maybe?

PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#18 Mailliw73

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Posted 25 February 2014 - 10:24 PM

Sure. Ras tends to search for able thiefs on the streets and in alleys. He does most of the main recruiting so that's most probable.
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)


#19 MozytheHealer

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Posted 26 February 2014 - 01:11 AM

Awesome. Also, face?

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PCs:

Delve, Silvan Calomine, Zella Calomine, Liss

Renette Deveaux, Marceline Dumont

Isabelle Sureau, Gisela Sureau,

Adalaide Getrue, Oliver Martel,

Grandell Tekiel, Yvette Valcier,

Katryn Domaille

WIPs:

Ranee, Delacey,

Theodoric Getrue, Kyl,

Vanessa Venture, Cedric Hallieau

Cordelia Morel, Kennith Fathvell

NPCs:

Issa Calomine, Randall Scanlan


#20 Mailliw73

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Posted 26 February 2014 - 03:43 AM

Hahah sure, I like it! ;)
-Mailliw73

-Player Characters-
Wilor Zerrung, Prelan Matarn (Workshop), Rikor (pending acceptance), Kler

House Zerrung

Archived (for now):

Aspir Elariel (WIP), Lord Gustav Bulvier (WIP), Maxill Seraphino (Under Revision), Abryn Zerrung (Still Writing), Rasdon (WIP)






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