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The Lord Ruler's perfect capital city, Luthadel, is doing the impossible: rebelling. Skaa half-breeds are being taught the power of Allomancy, something that the Lord Ruler's obligators said only existed in the nobility. The enslaved skaa, with their murderous benefactor, now fight back against a living god's oppression.

So, the Inquisition was formed. The nobles begin to fear assassination from all sides. The times of nobility Mistborn killing each other are over. The Steel Inquisitors look for aristocrat traitors and insurgent skaa, and the skaa try with all their strength to merely survive. The Lord Ruler's perfect Final Empire is slowly devolving into chaos.

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Miss Audine Langlois

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#1 Heliotrope

Steward in Training

Posted 10 March 2014 - 03:47 AM

I've barely even started her, but I want to share what I've started with. She is "disgustingly romantic and dreamy, but somewhat dumb and dull otherwise. Crushing super hard on Caden, and absolutely terrified of Colette" Probably not good for Colette's lady's maid to be scared of her. Or maybe hilarious and awesome.

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Name: Audine Langlois
Type: Noble
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Place of Origin: Garthwood, Southern Dominance
Occupation: Lady's Maid
Relationship Status: Single

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Type of Powers: Misting
Metals Used: Steel
Degree of Skill: Intermediate
Status: Known

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Audine, called "Dina" by her friends and some superiors, is neither very ugly nor very pretty. She attempts to appear as comely as possible, obediently brushing her curling golden hair a hundred strokes every morning and night, and applying powder and kohl daily. Her square jaw and dark brows tend to detract from an otherwise clasically pretty face, lending a slight mannishness to her otherwise wide lips and expressive grey eyes. Some claim that she steals her style from Colette Hasting, calling her a "biter" and otherwise impugning her originality in appearance. Yet Colette is more refined and polished in her looks, where Audine's clothing is simple and unembellished, and her hair prefers to go where it pleases, rather than lying in fat, styled sausage curls around her face.

Like most nobles, she is built somewhat slight and slim, but there is a hint of muscle hidden beneath her voluminous skirts. Thick thighs and meaty upper arms belie a girl with some strength, as is common among lower houses who may have skaa blood hidden much more closely to the family line than is usually admitted. She has a heaviness about her chest and hips that is not commonly found among the willowy noble class, but she avoids the restricting clothes favored by the higher houses, instead often seen in the simple gowns favored by plantation-dwelling nobles. No frills, simple patterns, and a distinctly repeatable dress design marks much of her closet, to Colette's chagrin.

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Lady Isovel Elariel

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Miss Audine Langlois

NienSarr (eventually, I swear)'

(another third-gen old noble lady who isn't as cray-cray as Izzy whose PB is either Maggie Smith or Penelope Wilton, unless she's a second-gen nobility Lady-wife whose PB is Elizabeth McGovern and yes I love Downton Abbey why do you ask?)

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