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The Lord Ruler's perfect capital city, Luthadel, is doing the impossible: rebelling. Skaa half-breeds are being taught the power of Allomancy, something that the Lord Ruler's obligators said only existed in the nobility. The enslaved skaa, with their murderous benefactor, now fight back against a living god's oppression.

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Phyra Venture

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#1 Phyra Venture

  • Rogue Venture Mistborn

MiBoam Obligara the Inquisikandra

Posted 29 June 2010 - 02:57 AM

"Phyra Venture"

Player Information
Handle : Phyra
Contact : [email protected]<script data-cfhash='f9e31' type="text/javascript">/* */</script>, Skype: Valkynphyre, TWG forum: Valkynphyre

Character Information
Name: Phyra Venture
Age: 18
Type: Noble
Gender: Female
Occupation: Noblewoman.
Marital Status: Single (for now)

Type of Powers: All Allomantic powers.
Metals Used: All
Degree of Skill: Advanced for most metals. Sees little use for Brass and gold.

Hair: Black Hair, long, often piled on top of her head in masses of curls.
Eyes: Green eyes
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 100 lbs
Voice: Melodius and seductive. Throaty.
Overall Appearance: Phyra is well endowed and knows it. she has an entire retinue of Skaa whose entire mission is to make her more beautiiful. She is well muscled, with pale skin. has recently taken to wearing strapless dresses, the first of Luthadel's ladies to do so. At home she wears as little as she can get away with.

Special Skills: Murder and seduction.
Strengths: Very practiced with all manner of weapons and schooled in assassination from childhood, she is as deadly as an inquisitor in her own way. She can also be very discrete when necessary.
Weaknesses: impatient, impestuous, and malicious, she can not wait for anything. Unless It's noble blood. She can have patience for that as long as she can smell the blood when she's done.

Bloodthirsty and lustful, She is a difficult mistborn to control. She is one of very few noblewomen who keep skaa lovers, but she kills them if they do not satisfy her. And her apetite is insatiable. When she kills, she likes to pose her victims if possible, in order to create the most fear. She is looking for a marriage at the moment, but has no intention of remaining faithful to him. Several important noblemen already have *ahem* discrete relations with her. She lusts for power as she lusts for all other things, and is looking to tie herself very tightly to a leading noble house.

She snapped around three years old when her father, The high Inquisitor pushed her and her brother off a balcony. She began training as a mistborn as soon as she was able to do so. Her youthful vigor hardened into bloodlust as she progressed, and eventually she killed her combat trainer during a sparring match. Her father was thrilled. He hired better trainers and she learned from then until she could beat them every time. She then killed them. By 16, she was prowling the night, murdering nobles that her father pointed her at.

When she found out her brother's wife was a Skaa, she wasted no time in cutting her open, going so far as to spread the gore throughout her brother's rooms. She actually felt she was doing Valkyn a favor by giving the credit to him.
Her kill count is now in the double digits.

Roleplay Sample
Phyra licked her lips, savoring the taste of the night air. The mists hid her from the towering keep. Lord Urien Savoy was a minor noble, but he had broken contract with house Venture. There were three guards. pitiful.

Lord Savoy liked to sit on a rocking chair on his balcony until he felt tired, and occassionally, he would fall asleep outside. Tonight was one such night. She removed the message she had prepared especially for this occasion. it was a small piece of metal. tetrahedral in shape. it had a small loop through which a ribbon was threaded. Red for vengeance.

She burned steel, pushing the piece of steel over three hundred feet before it thunked into the sleeping form of Lord Savoy.

She smiled. She could almost taste the blood on her lips. A pity she didn't have the luxury of playing wiith the body, but her orders were clear. Send the message.


Other Characters: Brand,Valkyn Venture, Fenna, Lian Vaunter

#2 Valkynphyre

MiBoam Obligara the Inquisikandra

Posted 29 June 2010 - 03:26 AM

Sounds like revision is needed, but shouldn't be impossible to get this Character ready by the time of the ball, eh?
Valkyn Venture
Other Characters: Phyra Venture, Brand, Fenna, Lian Vaunter.

#3 KChan

Atium Chandelier

Posted 29 June 2010 - 05:18 AM

Indeed. And after - as you well know - plenty of consideration, since you've changed everything we asked you to, I'm willing to accept this, so long as you keep in mind these few tidbits about the RP:

-Ultimately, Phyra would answer to Ellsworth Venture, as he's the leader of the House, over her Father (who technically should not be acting with Venture's interests in mind at all, as an Inquisitor; he will be working exclusively for the Lord Ruler). And if she's hard to control, you can expect some tension there.

-She'll need to be discreet about her skaa lovers; the Inquisition is hunting down halfbreeds and anyone at all who could potentially be involved in creating them. If rumors start flying, she may find an Inquisitor coming to call.

These are the main issues that gave me pause. If you'd like to change anything, feel free to do so (just let me know, please); otherwise I'll be marking this as Accepted. Thanks for working with us so diligently!

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