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The Lord Ruler's perfect capital city, Luthadel, is doing the impossible: rebelling. Skaa half-breeds are being taught the power of Allomancy, something that the Lord Ruler's obligators said only existed in the nobility. The enslaved skaa, with their murderous benefactor, now fight back against a living god's oppression.

So, the Inquisition was formed. The nobles begin to fear assassination from all sides. The times of nobility Mistborn killing each other are over. The Steel Inquisitors look for aristocrat traitors and insurgent skaa, and the skaa try with all their strength to merely survive. The Lord Ruler's perfect Final Empire is slowly devolving into chaos.

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Writing prompt/character motivation brain bubble: No one chooses to be a villain. What if villainy happens when being an awful person just becomes better than the alternatives? Updated 20 Apr · 0 comments

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Comatose found MBI through a thread announcing its resurrection on Timewasters Guide in June of 2010. Since then, his character count has steadily spiraled out of control. Somewhere along the way, he got spiked. You can blame KChan and Chaos for fostering the power-crazed maniac he has become today.

He primarily writes about Elariels, but has characters in most sectors and social classes of Luthadel.

In real life, Comatose is an English-Major turned Lawyer, living with his husband, Craig, in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan.

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