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Yeven- The Servant

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#1 Guest_Worldhopping Polar Bear_*

Posted 04 February 2017 - 05:34 PM

Type of Character: Ferring (Misting, Mistborn, Keeper, Kandra, Inquisitor, Noble, Skaa, etc.)

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Name/Handle: Polar Bear (Who are you on the site? What do you want us to call you?)

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Name:Yeven No canon names. From any work. No Kelsiers, no Kaladins, no Rands. ObiWaan is not an acceptable Kandra name.
Type: Terrisman (Skaa, Noble, Obligator, Inquisitor, Kandra, Terrisman)
Age: 35
Gender: Eunuch, Male
Place of Origin: Luthadel
Occupation: Servant
Relationship Status: Single

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(If Applicable. Remove section if your character has no powers)
Type of Powers: Ferring (Misting, Mistborn, Feruchemist, Inquisitor, Blessing)
Metals Used: Copper (For Mistborn, put "All". For Inquisitors, list nine to eleven spikes, as well as the power each spike is charged with. Kandra should name what their Blessing is. Keepers may list their most prominent or favorite metalminds, but it will be assumed they are equipped with the basics unless stated otherwise.)
Degree of Skill: Intermediate (Select from Novice, Intermediate, and Advanced. If your character has multiple powers, list a skill level for each metal. Please note that Savant is a state of being, not a level of skill, and thus is not appropriate here.)
Status: Hidden, Unsnapped (Known/Hidden, Unsnapped, etc. This is your character's status according to the rest of the world. Note that Snapped is NOT a status - specify if your character has not snapped yet, but otherwise, it will be assumed that he or she already has.)

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A small man, standing about five foot six, rather skinny, or willowy, in the Terris fashion, nondescript dark brown, clean cut hair, blue eyes, Yeven is very reserved and quiet, he does all that his masters ask him to do, and well, but shows almost no emotion, he almost seems depressed, because he is so quiet and reserved, but he is usually thinking deeply about something or another. (Include height, build, hair, eyes, and their general demeanor in your description, in prose format - no subheaders, please, and no images.)

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Yeven was raised in the Lord Ruler's Breeding Program, but was lost as a young child, before it could be known he was a copper misting. He was raised by a young Keeper, not much older than he was, and she was the only person he knew growing up. He hates the Lord Ruler and all he stands for, the entire ministry, and also feels a residual dislike for the Terrris, who he feels abandoned him. Strangely, however, he does not feel any dislike for (most) of the nobility, especially his masters.He is a very smart man, though he seems dumb to many because he merely sits thinking for great stretches of time.(Also include their moral attitudes, prejudices, and any mental disorders. Do not list, quote, or copy/paste anything from the sixteen personality types - you can use them as personal reference for your writing, but do your own work for your own character. We want to see your writing, not someone else's classifications.)

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Special Skills: Reading, Writing, Problem Solving, Observing. (For example, things like Reading, Writing, Knife Fighting, Lying, Observation, etc.)
Strengths: Quiet, Pensive, Very Smart, Very Calculated, Discerning (Try to make strengths and weaknesses relevant to your character. Try to tie them into your character's personality, experiences, relationships, etc.)
Weaknesses: Cynical, Distrusting, Slightly-Overconfident, Angry, Resentful, not combat trained, not very good in a fight. (Make sure your character's strengths and weaknesses are balanced. Try to avoid talking up your character's strengths and downplaying their weaknesses. We all have flaws; it's what makes us human, and our characters feel real. This is a great place to make your character even more interesting.)

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Much of Yeven's story is mentioned above, he was born in 893, , the names of his parents are not known, he was born in the breeding program, but the Keeper girl who raised him was named Kyren, she died one unfortunate evening in an encounter with a Steel Inquisitor. Yeven quietly plots revenge, but he knows that he cannot beat them in a fight, so he schemes and listens even to this day. He is normally a cool, cold and calculated person, but he is sometimes seized by a feeling of kindness, which marks him to his friends as a generous person. He is a very obedient servant, doing all in his power to help his masters, except when their orders coincide with his plots against the ministry. He has spent many years in lakeside, serving his masters there, until one of his masters had him collect a very large some of gold from another Nobleman, where he stole away with the gold, then showed up one evening in Luthadel serving under another master. He has a dark past, but makes the best he can with what he has.(Give this thought. Make the character feel like a real person. Include major events in the character's life. For example, if the character is an Allomancer, include how he or she snapped. Try to understand what events shaped your character into his current perspective. Also, for simplicity, please name the year the character was born and their parents' name, for the purposes of the Timeline thread. The year the character is born is simply 918 - their age.)

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Yeven paused, "Of course, master," he said in a clipped careful tone. "I shall be about it immediately, Lord." Stalking off to the kitchen, he quickly whipped up some food using the dark truffles and fine herbs at his disposal. He reached into his robes and produced a small vial, which he sprinkled over the food. Hurrying back to the grand chamber where (Insert House Lord Here) sat eating with his guest. "Ah, and there is Yeven with the food," Lord (?) said, winking at his guest. Yeven smiled to himself as he set down the dish. He stood back discretely, then let his gaze wander over to where some of the Lord's clerks sat writing. As the guest took his first bite, one of the clerks suddenly became alert. He quickly looked at the guest, then rang a small handbell, signaling that someone was burning metals. The guest, startled himself at the presence of steel flakes in his food cursed, then, as the house hazekillers flooded into the room, the man dropped a coin then flew away, smashing through the window. Yeven smiled. Another plot succesful, another allomancer marked. He transferred the memory into the copper metalmind hidden underneath his right arm.(A scene from this character's viewpoint. Take care in picking a scene. It could be a scene from the past or it could happen practically during current events. In any case, write something important to the character so everyone can truly feel the character)

#2 Guest_Worldhopping Polar Bear_*

Posted 04 February 2017 - 05:35 PM

Hmm... Why isn't the code working?

#3 Comatose

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House Raisaal

Posted 08 February 2017 - 03:37 AM

It looks like you posted the whole box? Just copy and paste what is inside of it. Also, when posting with code, you need to flick the little light switch button before pasting to switch modes for it to take effect. I'll see if I can fix on my phone but no promises.

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