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#1 Kess

  • Frozen Heart

Sureau Assassin
  • Age24

  • Relationship StatusSingle

  • OriginLuthadel

  • Allomantic StatusKnown to a select few

Posted 26 November 2017 - 06:52 PM

Skaa Misting

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Name/Handle: Mora
Contact: PM

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Name: Kess
Type: skaa
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Place of Origin:
Occupation: Smoker for Datura’s Smuggling Crew/Rebel Cell
Relationship Status: Single

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Type of Powers: Misting
Metals Used: Copper
Degree of Skill: Intermediate
Status: Known to Datura’s Crew, her former crew, Ollie, and Meb

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Most of the time, Kess isn’t interested in attracting notice. There’s a good chance you’ve passed her on the streets of Luthadel without even knowing it. Dressed most often in drab greys and faded blacks, she looks like any other skaa among the slums and ash heaps. Her clothing is like that of most ska laborers, well-worn, and austere, equally suited to running down alleys and carting piles of ash to the trash heap. Most of the time, she’s got a tarnished silver pocket watch on her so she can keep precise track of time. On the streets, she tends to wear a lopsided newsboy cap, sometimes with most of her long, dark brown hair tucked underneath, some strands purposefully draped over her right eye, her green eye, while her brown eye looks out at the world without any obstructions. It wouldn’t be unusual to mistake her for a boy, especially with her mid-back length hair hidden. With her jackets and loose shirts, the gentle curves of her slender frame are largely concealed by the fabric, as is the small layer of muscle carefully cultivated through a strict exercise routine. Her clothes also hide a small collection of self-inflicted vertical scars on her right thigh and lower abdomen.

At 5’3”, Kess doesn’t look physically imposing, but there is a certain gravity to her. She looks out at the world with a hard, bitter stare. She doesn’t smile, not really, she could feign one if she has to but it would look and feel forced, maybe even feral. In the privacy of the crew den, she doesn’t have any qualms about showing both of her eyes at once, as she’s no longer concerned that the uneven sight might be off-putting for some.

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Kess is a woman of few words, content to offer a nod, a look, or a single word in response when nothing more is required. She has no talent - or interest - in small talk and tries to avoid “long talk,” or unbridled conversations that can lead into personal territory. She prefers to keep other people at a healthy distance. That task generally isn’t difficult with her dour personality and her blunt manner. Her reactions to most stimuli are contained to bitter-edged indifference. Not surprisingly, she doesn’t typically give compliments and she also doesn’t know how to take them. A nod from Kess could be considered praise.

Beyond her unpleasant demeanor is a fierce sense of loyalty to her crew. Kess knows her place and takes her orders without complaint or hesitation. In general, Kess doesn’t offer her opinion unless it is asked for, but she might address someone privately if she thinks they are seriously endangering the crew. If she had the chance to help counterbalance that, she’d make the attempt. One moment of weakness is enough to bring everything down. That lesson is burned into her soul.

Since learning it, her ambition has been to become the perfect tool.

That doesn’t mean to become every tool, but rather to try to minimize factors that contribute to human error. Control over her feelings is at the top of the list. That doesn’t mean she doesn’t feel things. She feels guilt every second of every day for her failure. She feels hate for the Inquisitors who hunt and kill skaa half-breeds . . . who killed Mav. Hate for the Obligators who uphold the Lord Ruler’s government. Hate for the nobles who beat her kind, starve them, and rape them. Hate for the Lord Ruler for every breath he’s ever taken, every word he’s ever spoken, every move he’s ever made, for all of it has been in the service of tyranny and countless atrocities.

. . . And she hates emotional Allomancy, since emotions are at the root of many problems, and her biggest mistake.

Those feelings fuel her ambition; they give her the strength to keep pushing forward, to make herself stronger, less human.

Even when feelings cannot be crushed, she tries at least minimize any outward expression of them, sticking as closely as possible to the outward demeanor she’s cultivated.

When it comes to the notion of romantic entanglements, Kess has rejected the idea given what happened the last time she was interested in someone that way. Ever since, she’s taken a utilitarian approach to the concept, feeling that people may have physical urges to satisfy but that the emotion - or even a partner - isn’t necessary to take care of such impulses.

Being reliable is of paramount importance to Kess. Tools aren’t lazy, they don’t get caught up in leisure pursuits, or show up late for appointments. She makes every effort to manage and keep track of her time so she doesn’t fall short in those respects, even though life in a smuggling crew can mean keeping odd hours. When circumstances allow, sleep is prioritized, to minimize sloppiness from exhaustion. When not working or sleeping she’s likely working on improving her utility to the crew by improving her skill with copper, knives, archery, her fists, or even pain tolerance via self-inflicted suffering. The latter is limited to places of privacy, unless she can work it in on the sly, allowing herself to foul up at sparring just to force herself to take a good punch.

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Special Skills: Knife-fighting, archery, observation, blending in, sneaking, fast runner, heightened pain tolerance, emotional restraint, resourceful

Over the years, Kess has cultivated a strong sense of discipline and loyalty to her crew that helps guide her actions. Everyone has a job to do, and she intends to do hers right, which means continually sharpening her skills so she’ll be ready for her next assignment, and keeping track of time so she’s always where she needs to be. She has a strong sense of personal responsibility that drives her to push herself harder, to make sure she isn’t a weak link. She rejects frivolity as distractions counter-productive to her goals.

In the service of that mission, not to be a weak link, Kess has tried to increase her pain tolerance - both in the emotional and physical sense. She’s clamped down on her emotions and tries not to let them rule her as they did in her youth. As far as physical pain, she continually works to increase her tolerance through self-wounding. She’d rather be tortured and die in an interrogation than give up the rest of the crew.

After years living solo on the streets as a teenager, Kess has become resourceful and self-reliant. While being trapped is never a good situation to be in, she could probably figure out a way to leverage her surroundings. She isn’t the type to turn her nose up at sifting through trash if that’s what’s needed to keep from starving. She’s got no moral qualms with stealing for survival, either . . . or just taking something away from the nobles.

Kess left her sense of vanity behind long ago, and no longer cares if she’s pleasing to other people both in her appearance and blunt personality. She wants to be known as a good, reliable crewmember, but the rest doesn’t matter to her. She’s no longer ashamed of her eyes, and she isn’t ashamed of her scars.

Guilt is one emotion that Kess has never mastered control of. It’s what took her life to where it is now. She carries it with her always, and the biggest fear she has is feeling the way she did the night Mav died. Guilty and truly heartbroken. She knows she can’t undo anything that happened, so the next best thing is working against the Empire . . . and finding a way to kill those bastards with the spiked eyes. Since she keeps people at arm’s length, and has a certain demeanor to keep up, anything she doe feel, she needs to process on her own and carry by herself.

Kess’s devotion to the crew does come with a weakness. She’s a good soldier and doesn’t feel it is her place to disagree with orders given to her. That means she could find herself on tasks that perhaps weren’t well-planned or fully thought out.

While Kess has been trying to improve herself at all times, she still hasn’t learned how to read. This is one weakness she actively wants to eliminate.

Kess’s upbringing in the slums, years spent on the street alone, and generally sour persona means that she has no polish. She has no skill at small-talk and isn’t in a position to charm anyone. She’s not sure can smile without looking crazy.

At 5’3” and without the power that Pewter provides, Kess is no match, physically, for those who are far bigger and stronger. She can give a punch, and take one, but it’s probably easier to carry her off than she’d like to admit, thus she relies a lot on her weapons and her speed.

She currently carries a silver pocket watch tied to a string in her jacket pocket, since keeping track of time is so important. She’d like to eliminate this metal, but it will probably be a very, very long time before she can afford a watch made from alternative materials like wood or bone.

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Kess was always a bit different.

Born in the slums of Luthadel to a pair of overworked, abused factory workers, Lev and Jana, in 894, the infant was swiftly rejected as an anomaly. She was born with complete heterochromia, one green eye, and one brown. The couple was too afraid to wait and see if time would resolve the mismatch, because the baby’s green eye looked just like that of their noble-blooded overseer. It hurt for Lev to see it, as it made him to think about his inability to protect Jana from the man who “rented” them from the Lord Ruler. If it was obvious to him, the little girl was better off growing up in a different tenement, associated with a different business . . . where their overseer had no reason to visit. It was better off for everyone to think that the child hadn’t lived. The midwife knew what to do, where to send the child.

Kess was brought to another tenement, to a skaa woman called Meb, who accepted children who were parentless or broken in some way. The infant girl became the newest resident of the elderly woman’s corner of the group home. The bulk of the skaa who shared the overcrowded, dilapidated dwelling were superstitious. Having no explanation within easy reach for her “defect,” she was labeled a freak. But she wasn’t the only one of Meb’s strays with an unkind label. A boy of four, Ollie, had lost an arm in a factory accident. The two of them were commonly referred to as the “irregulars.”

As Kess grew enough to become more conscious of her surroundings, she realized that despite the close quarters there was usually a small space left around her as both people tried to steer clear of her, as much as their constraints would allow. Ollie and Meb were exceptions to this. The little girl took to positioning her hair so strands fell over her green eye, hiding the mismatch as well as she could.

She was six when she got into her first fight because of her “irregular” status. Kess was sweeping ashes when some older kids from the tenement decided to let her know just what they thought of her by way of fists and booted feet. They ran their mouths the whole time, calling her a freak, saying her parents threw her in the garbage because she had crazy eyes. She fought back as best as she could, making use of the broom but she was small and there were four of them. The beating was enough for Kess to Snap, for her to feel the burning sensation in her stomach for the first time without knowing what it was. Ollie, a Tineye, heard the commotion and ran to break up the fight. Pulling the kids off of Kess with his good arm, and pushing them aside with his body. He managed to carry her over his shoulder and back to Meb. Ollie helped Meb get Kess cleaned up and bandaged. Through tears, she asked if she was a freak, she asked if her parents threw her away. The old woman told her that they didn’t throw her away, but that they couldn’t keep her because it wasn’t safe. That she had to be a secret. As for the freak part, Meb asked why she wanted to be normal when she could be special. Ollie told her that he was more of a freak than she was. At ten, he’d had more time to accept it, but he told her that accepting it was the best thing he’d done. Fighting it, he said, was like fighting yourself, and you needed your strength to take on everyone else.

That’s when she told them she’d felt a weird burning in her stomach for a little while, that she didn’t know what was wrong with her, that maybe the beating had broken something beyond bone. But the sensation sounded familiar to Meb and Ollie.

Meb fetched a vial of metals in liquid, and sent Ollie to retrieve Geord, a Seeker. On their way back to the child’s bedside, Geord instructed Ollie to burn and not stop until he was told otherwise. Upon their return, Kess downed the vial and confirmed she felt the burn worse now, with unwept tears and worry in her mismatched eyes. Ollie gave one of her hands a gentle squeeze, looking from her face to Meb and Geord.

“Are you burning, Ollie?” Geord asked, a bit impatiently.

The ten year-old nodded.

“And you’re sure you’re not, Meb?”

“By the Lord Ruler, I’m not, Geord.”

“Then it looks like we’ve got ourselves a lil’ Smoker.”

Ollie and Meb were her family in that place, their bonds made even tighter by their shared heritage as Mistings. Meb’s lessons expanded to train up the younger Coppercloud in their shared ability - and responsibility - as protectors. And as new children turned up in Meb’s corner, they grew up a among the “irregulars” such that they didn’t see much irregularity at all.

* * *
Kess was fourteen when she first met Mav. She was emptying a crate of ashes into a dumpster when the Lurcher rounded a corner and came barrelling down her alley. He yanked her behind the refuse container, and put a finger to his lips, as he tried to quiet his breathing. Surprise and confusion were written all over her face, as she readjusted her hair to flow down in front of her green eye again. After a few minutes of quiet, he peeked out from behind the container and relaxed.

“Thanks,” he said as he took a coin from a fancy purse, and put it in Kess’s left palm. “Sorry I got ash all over you,” he cracked a handsome smile. He couldn’t have been more than seventeen or eighteen. “The name’s Mav. What’s yours?”


“You have a good one, Kess. I know my day is better for running into you. Literally.”

He inclined his head in goodbye, and headed back out into the streets of Luthadel.

But that wasn’t the last she saw of him.

She had been on her way back to the tenement when she heard the sounds of someone running, and she shifted to flatten herself against the wall, to get out of the person’s way. She could a glimpse of his face and recognized it immediately. Soon he was standing in front of her, breathing hard, and tweaking his appearance.

“Do me . . . a favor . . . just stay . . . with me, Kess,” he said flicking his eyes to the alley’s entrance, yanking off his coat and turning it inside out to reveal a beat up looking garment. He shoved his hat into an inside pocket, bent down and dragged his hands through the ash drifts on the cobblestones. He streaked his face with it, and then did the same to her, moving her hair back in the process.

“Just act natural,” he breathed, before leaning in close and putting his lips to hers, his hands finding their way to her waist.

Kess had never been kissed before. She hadn’t expected that another run-in with Mav would lead to that moment. Even when he asked her to stay with him, she didn’t expected this would be part of his cover and escape. But even knowing what this was for didn’t mean she was able to control her reaction to it. She’d seen other skaa around her age who’d felt something for each other, seen the looks they’d exchanged, their interlaced hands, kisses that ranged from the shy and sheepish to the shameless and all-encompassing. Like many other girls her age, she’d craved the same for herself . . . she just hadn’t had any luck in that regard. Possibly because of her eyes, or more than that. She didn’t know Mav, but he didn’t know her either, didn’t carry the same judgment that others around her age did . . . He was gorgeous and mysterious and had a charm that came through from their first, brief meeting. His touch, his kiss, and his attentions - or more accurately, partial attentions - were welcome. Her heart raced and she felt magnetized, her whole body drawn to him in ways she’d never felt before. Despite being unsure of herself, and what she was doing, she kissed him back. They stayed that way until his pursuers, complaining about losing the ‘scent’ of the Lurcher, stumbled upon the sight of them, mumbled under their breath about what they saw, and left.

Mav pulled his face back from hers, slowly, gently, separating their lips with care. His mouth curved into a mischievous grin. “That’s the second time you’ve saved my ass, Kess. That was,” his eyes dipped to her lips and back up again. “. . . sweeter than the first. Thank you.” He looked at her for a moment more, before releasing his hands. “Seeing as we’re on track to make this kind of a habit . . . maybe you’d consider joining my crew. So you’d know in advance, you’d be helping me escape.” He gave her a wink. “No rush, take some time to think about it. I’d introduce you to the others, see how you feel.”

“I’ll think about it,” Kess replied, reasonably sure her face was flushed. Her hand went to her hair and she realized it had been out of her face this whole time, since Mav had moved it to kiss her. He took her wrist gently, as she was trying to finger-comb it back into place.

“You’ve got beautiful eyes, Kess. You shouldn’t hide them - at least from me,” he smiled, “if you want to hide them from the authorities, I fully support that, because they’re not the kind of eyes you forget.” He took his hand back once more.

“I know where to find you.”

* * *
“Mav’s a criminal,” Ollie said, his arm crossed over his chest. At eighteen he was taller than an average skaa, and corded in muscle from near-constant manual work, which he carried out tirelessly without complaint.

“Is it really crime if he’s taking just a tiny bit back of what’s been taken from us?”

“You sound just like them.”

“Like who?”

“Like all the thieving crews who scoop up Mistings like us to do their dirty work.”

“At least they’re fighting the good fight, Ollie. What in the name of the Lord Ruler am I doing here anyway? How am I helping our cause?”

“You help keep this place safe, Kess. You burn while Meb sleeps. You help with the orphans.”

“They don’t need me. They’ve got Meb and they’ve got you, and they have each other.”

“You’re wrong, Kess. They need you. I need you.

“For once in my life, I feel wanted, Ollie. I’m going.”

“If this is the only time you’ve felt that way, Kess,” he punched his single fist into the wall, scraping his knuckles, so that blood started to flow. He swallowed, his voice emerging in a combination of whisper and growl. “Then I’ve been failing everyday. He wants your copper, Kess. I want you.”

“You don’t know him, Ollie. You don’t know that.”

“Neither do you.”

* * *
“You’ll always have a home here, Kess,” Meb said, loosening her hug and brushing the hair out of the young skaa’s face to kiss each cheek. “If you decide this move wasn’t right for you, you come right back here, no matter what time it is, no matter what has happened, okay? You’re loved here. You’ll always be loved here.”

“Thank you, Meb,” she said with an unsteady, small smile, the weight of what she was doing truly dawning on her for the first time.

Then Ollie pulled her close, crushing their bodies together, she felt his warmth and strength. For a moment all he did was hold her that way. “To say that I will miss you is the greatest understatement I could make,” he whispered in her ear. “You have been fighting the good fight, defying the nobles by helping the children, and Meb, and me build lives that have happiness and hope.”

He relaxed his arm a bit, so he could look at her. He gently pressed his nose to hers.

“I hope I see you again. I hope one day we’ll fight together . . . You know where to find me.”

His lips were close to hers, his breath warm on her face, but he didn’t let himself kiss her.

* * *
Kess was eager to please her new companions, and she took that attitude to every task she was asked to perform, and every lesson on crew life that she was taught, even the minor stuff like keeping the crew den tidy. Lesa and Gage served as Thugs, Shelle was their Soother, Jace was their Coinshot, Gierre - Mav’s brother - was a Seeker, and Rita was a Tineye. They were a young crew in general, but Kess was the youngest and least seasoned member. They’d lost their Smoker, a Coinshot, and two non-Mistings when a previous crew member, Dane, had sold the group down the river out of greed. His name had become a curse word of sorts among the remaining crew.

Gage had taken to calling her Mis - or sometimes Lil’ Mis - short for mismatched, on account of her eyes, even though Kess generally kept one covered. Her eyes were considered both an asset and a liability. Signals were sometimes given with her eyes, if her green eye was visible, Obligators or Inquisitors had been spotted, if the brown eye was visible, all was clear.

Kess generally got on well with everyone and proved herself a reliable Smoker. She sought out Mav’s praise more than the others, and generally he gave it to her, expressing his thanks, mussing up her hair, and giving her those winks and smiles that warmed her heart. They’d shared hugs, but the friendly crew hugs that were shared throughout the group after a job well done. He hadn’t kissed her again, not since that day in the alley, even as she grew into more of a woman.

It was easy to see why.

He and Rita were close. He and Rita gave each other those looks. He and Rita shared those touches that went beyond mere friendship. She’d seen them kiss more than once.

Rita didn’t like her very much. The feeling was mutual. Rita had something she wanted, and Kess was green with envy. She’d felt that feeling before, seeing other skaa girls who were pretty, who got positive attention, who had two eyes that matched. Rita was beautiful, tall like a noblewoman, with long black hair, big blue eyes, and an hourglass physique. Kess was short, slender, with subtle curves and mismatched irises . . .

Shelle was another beauty, blonde with a heart-shaped face, amber eyes and a smile brighter than the sunlight that made it down to the streets of Luthadel. With her practiced charm and Soothing abilities she knew how to make nearly any man fall at her feet, and often did, in service of the crew. For her part, Lesa was petite and powerful, taken to wearing form-fitting clothing. She was a natural born flirt who had Gage wrapped around her little finger.

It was intimidating being around Rita, Shelle, and Lesa. But it wasn’t easy being around the others, either. Crewmembers’ powers were part of everyday life, and by comparison being a Smoker seemed kind of lame.

Rita could see and hear what was coming long before anyone else. Lesa and Gage could knock out any threats with a single punch, and could carry wounded - or supplies - with little effort. Shelle could Soothe people to her will, and dampen all emotions that were not useful to their efforts. Mav and Jace were opposite sides of the same coin, pushing and pulling on metal as needed for combat or mobility or theft. Gierre could detect other Allomancers.

She could resist emotional Allomancy. And she could hide her crewmates who had more useful abilities.

She was a necessary part of the crew - an important piece of the puzzle - Mav had assured her. She was a protector, an escape. A place of refuge. One they’d desperately needed, especially if they were going to do real damage to the Final Empire.

* * *
Two short years later, it all fell apart.

She’d gone to wish Mav luck before their big job, but she’d heard him and Rita on the other side of the door, so she stayed her hand instead of knocking and caught part of their conversation.

“in love with you, Mav. It’s on her sleeve. Everyone can see it.”

“She’s just a kid, Rita - a good kid. It’s a crush. She’ll grow out of it.”

“She’s not ready.”

“She’ll have to. The time is right. After this job we were going to make it official. I’m putting a ring on that finger and everyone will be happy for us - including Kess - you’ll see.”

“Mav . . .”

“Relax, my Love. We’ve only got a couple of hours before I’ve got to go . . . I know how I want to spend them . . .”

When Rita spoke again, it was to moan his name.

* * *
In her sixteen years, Kess had experienced many emotions. But this was something different. She thought this had to be the heartbreak that others talked about. She didn’t know what to do with it. She felt broken. She felt a deep sense of loss and sadness. It hurt to breathe. It hurt to move. It hurt to stand still. It hurt to cry but that didn’t stop the tears from falling and the anguished sounds to form in her throat. She loved Mav. But he loved someone else. He thought she was a kid. Everything she’d felt had been one-sided. She retreated to her room and cried herself to sleep.

And missed getting into position in time.

She woke up to sound of her door nearly being ripped off its hinges. Rita hadn’t seen her in position from her perch on a nearby rooftop. She dragged Kess out the door and they ran hard, trying to get to the square where crowds and copper would both provide cover and confusion.

But they were too late. They were outside the main square when they realized what was happening.

Jace and Mav were being chased by an Inquisitor. He was so fast, so strong, so hateful. The crowd cover they’d needed so badly started to fall apart as fearful citizens cleared out of the way. Kess wanted to run across the square, wanted to jump on the Inquisitor, to use her last breaths to help Mav and Jace escape. But a hand clamped down on her quivering lips and another pulled her behind a large metal statue of the Lord Ruler.

“There is nothing you can do,” Rita said, her own anguish evident, as everything went from bad to worse before their eyes. Jace shot metal nails at the creature, but it’s push was too strong, it sent the nails backwards, pushing too many holes through Jace at once. With the Coinshot coughing his final breaths, the Inquisitor turned his attentions to the retreating form of Mav. It took seconds for him to catch up to the Lurcher who’d pulled himself across the square via the metal lampposts and fences. Then Mav breathed his last as the Inquisitor skewered him on the spiked tops of an iron fence.

Kess now knew what heartbreak truly was. It wasn’t the thing she’d felt before. As bad as that was . . . it was nothing compared to what she felt now. The carnage stopped then, the Inquisitor left the square, left the mixed crowds of noble and skaa behind to process what they’d seen.

“I can’t look at you right now,” Rita said through a veil of tears. Kess could only nod and turn and turn away. “But we can’t stay here . . . it isn’t safe.”

“But - I can’t - Ma-”

“We can’t. We can’t. It’s a trap. They want us to go to him. They want to catch us and impale us beside him.”

“I should just go. Let them kill me.”

“Don’t you dare, Kess. Mav cared about you. He wouldn’t have let you. I just. Please. It’s just hard for me to look at you right now.”

Gage and Lesa found them, then. Gage carried her all the way back to the crew den. Once they were there, Shelle Soothed Rita to make life liveable. She offered the same to Kess, but she wouldn’t let her. She insisted that she needed to feel this. Kess was beyond tears. Beyond words.

That experience defined the rest of her life.

If she knew one thing, it was that she couldn’t allow emotion to rule her, to get in the way of what needed to be done, to cause her to make a mistake.

Gierre was sitting outside her room when she opened her door the next morning, her few possessions in a sack over her shoulder.

“You don’t have to leave, Kess.”

“Yes, I do.”

“Rita is having a rough time, we all are, but we’ll get through it. We’ve lost people before . . . it’s never easy.”

She swallowed, and fought back tears. “But this time it’s my fault. She shouldn’t have to look at me. None of you should.”

“You’re part of this crew. You didn’t sell us down the canal . . . things just went wrong.”

“I went wrong. Me. I’m not worthy of this crew. You’ll find another Smoker, a better one.”

“Mav cared about you. And Jace. The rest of us still do.”

“You’re better off without me right now . . . maybe it won’t always be that way . . . But today, it is. Thanks for everything, Gierre. Pass along those thanks to the rest of the crew, all right?”

* * *
For the next few years, Kess went solo, determined to forge herself into a powerful tool, someone strong, someone not easily swayed by emotion. She wanted to shed as many weaknesses as possible before going back to crew life. She needed to be more worthy of it first, needed to know she wouldn’t endanger anyone else. She wanted to fight Mav’s fight, to demolish the Empire, to take from those who’d taken everything, to kill the creature who’d ended the man she loved.

Her first act on this path was one of vengeance. She’d cultivated some knife skill while part of Mav’s crew, but she hadn’t taken a life before. She knew of a guy who deserved to meet his end on the pointy end of one of her knives.


The Smoker who’d let the crew down on purpose. Who’d let people die on purpose. Dane, who was the whole reason she’d been recruited in the first place. If she hadn’t been recruited, she couldn’t have failed . . .

Kess was a good observer and a good listener. She’d spent time in enough taverns to find out that Dane loved cards. And women. And alcohol. She kept tabs on his favorite haunts, and paid attention to the women he paid attention to. Most were of the paid variety. Something free might attract his interest . . .

She joined his card game and nursed an ale after he’d already been drinking for a good long while. She’d unbuttoned the top of her shirt, inviting his eyes and remarking on the heat in the room more than once. She threw a few interested smiles his way, like she’d seen Shelle do, and she let her fingers brush his as she changed out cards or showed her hand. She tried to flirt like Lesa did, commenting on how attractive he was, how strong he seemed. Ultimately, he was intrigued by the hair that hid part of her face, the newsboy cap worn at an angle.

Kess offered to show him that and more in the alley . . . if he showed her more of him, of course.

It was her first time. And his last. She got rid of her virginity, so it would never be something she held on to, something in the way of an objective or an order from a crew boss, so she wouldn’t think about sex needing to be romantic. She’d given it away for vengeance. For guilt. For Mav.

Dane was still enjoying himself as he mock pleaded for Kess to take off her hat and show her full face. She asked if he was sure he was ready for it, and he all too happily confirmed. She took off the cap, let him see both of her eyes, and brought her lips to his ear.

“Mav says hello,” she whispered, just before slashing his throat with the knife she’d concealed in her hat.

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Until the age of 20, Kess scraped out a lonely existence on the street, derelict buildings, and rented rooms. She kept to herself until being solitary felt normal for her. She’d gone from living with Meb, Ollie, and a whole building of skaa, to Mav’s crew, so it took some time to get used to being alone. She needed to feel truly self-sufficient. She did odd jobs and scavenged to make that happen.

The full meaning of time hit her during those days, when she had to fill all the waking minutes with tasks that contributed to her ultimate goal of eliminating as many weaknesses as possible. She used the time to exercise, to observe the people of the city, to track people, to pick pockets, to practice her punches, and kicks, her knife throwing. She used it to build up her pain tolerance, slicing her skin open where no one would see unless they’d gotten her clothes off. In time the incisions she made grew deeper, creating a collection of raised vertical scars on her right thigh and lower abdomen. Vanity had no place in this new version of herself. She was all about utility. She would try to look attractive if and when it had a purpose.

She took an interest in alternatives to traditional metal knives, after seeing how easily metal could be turned on crew members in the field. She opted instead for knives made entirely from wood and some made with glass blades; they were just as easily concealed as the standard without the vulnerabilities that came with metal. To make herself more useful over distance, she practiced archery with wood, stone, and glass-tipped arrows. That skill was trickier to gain given that she couldn’t walk around with a bow in the open. She practiced in an abandoned, ruined factory that was partially caved in, using the expansive factory-floor to practice shots at different paces. She lived there for a while and kept the bow and arrows hidden under a loose floorboard when not in use.

More than her knives or her bow and arrows, Kess valued an old pocket watch she’d gotten back when she’d joined Mav’s crew, not just because of how she’d come by it, but because of its timekeeping utility. The watch was definitely stolen, and had the following engraving on the inside: “To Alexander, Love Christiane.” It was metal - tarnished silver - which was a liability, but Kess planned on keeping it until she could replace it with something else. For now, she wore it tied to a string inside her jacket pocket. It was tied such that with one tug the knot would come undone and she’d lose the watch. Better that, than get pulled along with it.

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After about four years of going solo, she judged herself ready to join another crew, even though she was still far from perfect. She kept her ear to the ground, listening for chatter on what crews were active and where she might be a good fit. The name Datura came up a lot, more than most. She was known for being tough as nails, but for caring about those who worked for her. She was also famous for acquiring other crews. Datura’s crew became Kess’s first choice. She just had to figure out how to make her move.

Lyle was a small-time crew leader who had recently been absorbed into Datura’s operation. He’d acted amenable to the change in authority, but when he was in his cups, he slurred about out how he really felt. He wanted to take it from her. To absorb some of her people into his crew, take over from the inside, and reap all the benefits.

He definitely didn’t have the numbers, not at the moment, anyway. But he did have a Rioter’s touch, so there was a chance he could sway enough people in his direction. Even at the tavern people nodded at his drunken diatribes, those who’d come from his crew or who’d come to be part of Datura’s crew after hostile acquisitions pulled them in. Kess acted as though his rioting had an effect on her.

Lyle would be a good gift.

She took her time, following Lyle’s pub visits, conversations, and habits. She learned that after his sixth drink or so he tended to take a piss break. She anticipated one of his breaks, waited in the alley, and knocked him out with a loose brick.

She “borrowed” a wheelbarrow and carted Lyle right to Datura’s door, bound and gagged, and buried beneath a pile of ash. Kess explained the gift as simply as possible and suggested she send someone someone back to the tavern to hear some of the traitorous words for themselves.

And she pitched her services. Her knives, her arrows, and her copperclouds.

Thankfully, the bold move paid off, and Kess was accepted into the fold. She’s been a part of Datura’s outfit ever since.

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Lyle talked a lot of shit when he was drunk.

That wasn’t the only thing about him that changed under the influence of alcohol. His entire posture transformed from sitting up straight, emphasizing his height, to slumping over the table and leaning on both of his elbows, a full tankard of ale in between the two. Almost like there was treasure in that cup, that he was sloppily guarding from everyone else.

There was some truth to that. Kess had noticed the Rioter slip something into his own drink. Zinc.

Metal to ratchet up the emotions. Alcohol to loosen the tongues.

The formula wasn’t a stupid one. Lyle’s problem was that he let his performance become his reality. Instead of switching his drink to something non-alcoholic, or nursing his cups, he let himself become intoxicated, let his tongue become too loose.

Still, he commanded most of the room. She’d claimed a good spot with a view of him, but close to the door, at one of the tavern’s long communal tables. Everyone on the bench opposite her had turned themselves around to get a better look, to join his conversation. Even drunk, he knew how to pull their heartstrings.

Kess was burning copper, as she did every waking hour, so that shit didn’t work on her. Not that anyone could tell by looking at her. Outwardly, she’d joined the hive mind, drumming the tabletop, and raising her tankard of tea at the right moments - it was essentially the same color as the house’s medium ale.

Lyle had imbibed enough, and been cheered enough, that he decided to wax philosophical, on the top of his chair. He stood up, and put one unsteady leg on the seat, then the other, missing the middle of the seat and causing two of the chair legs to rise off the floor. The Muscle who sat next to him helped right the chair again, while Lyle grinned at his mistake and swayed a bit before regaining his balance. He held up his cup triumphantly and the crowd erupted in applause, which Kess joined in on. He wasn’t a bad looking guy, with golden hair, and big brown eyes, and a little bit of soot strategically smeared on his face to show that he worked his ass off like the lot of them, even though he definitely wasn’t the average working man.

Over her time observing him, Kess had seen that he did in fact possess charisma, which was vital to getting others to follow you, unless you ruled by fear alone, which was also effective considering the Lord Ruler’s track record. But Lyle’s fondness for alcohol weakened him. Kess would never understand this particular weakness in people. It was so easy to avoid.

“We’re out ‘ere, railin’ againsht tyranny. Puttin’ our lives ontha line. Organizin’ ourshelves, trustin’ eachoder. An’ wha’ dowee git fer it?” Lyle paused, surveying the room with his eyes. He caught Kess’s gaze for less than a second during his sweep.

“Anoderr fuckin’ tyran’. She dinks she could jus’ take eny crew she wants. Dinks it’s fine to imposh ‘er rule. We’re takin’ risk-ks, tryin’o be freer, to gobbern ourshelves, but no, she’s gotta make ‘ershelf a Lordessh o’er us awl!”

The crowd erupted into a combination of applause, table-drumming, and cheering, their anger and resentment likely helped along by the combination of zinc and strong drink. Lyle’s logic was sound, especially considering that he was on his sixth drink of the night.

No one seemed put off by the slurring that threaded its way through his speech. The crowd was in his ash-stained palm. He could’ve been so useful. So powerful. If she’d met him when she was a young teen, she probably would’ve fallen under his spell - if he’d been sober - and talked less. If only he’d focused his gifts on the Empire instead of letting his own sense of importance takeover. It was well and truly a waste. She almost felt bad about what she had to do.


“Sho, I shay we take it backk fromtha bitch! We show ‘er that we’re nit ‘ers to conquerr! We mey’ave ben born slaves to the Lord Rulerr, but we’ll neber be ‘er slaves!”

More cheering. More whoops.

“We kin rise upp!” He shouted, thrusting his cup out before him to punctuate his speech, some liquid sloshing out the sides. “We kin take backk our crews!” Again, he punched the tankard forward, like a warrior with an ax or a hammer in-hand. “We kin turrn dose who’ve ben too af-fraid to step outta line! We kin awaken dere pride, dere loyaltee to where dey come from!”

Sweat shined in his golden hair, and on his forehead, passion and alcohol mingling inside him. He would’ve been a hell of a recruiter for the rebellion. Oh, Lyle, you self-absorbed ash-hole.

“She neber botered to earn our truss. Our loyaltee. She only threatened to throw us inna cinall. Thas notta choice, broads an’ gents! Thas disrespect! THATS BULLSCHITT!”

The crowd went wild as Lyle took another swig of ale. The drumming on the tables was loud, unified in a single rhythm, as everyone in the room chanted, “Lyle! Lyle! Lyle! Lyle!”

He pulled his tankard from his lips and his lips curved into a broad, boyish grin. The kind that melted weak hearts.

“We’ll give Daturrahh the same non-choice! Fall’n line . . .” He did another sweep of the room with those impassioned eyes. “Or sink to tha bottom o’tha cinall! WHO’S WITH ME?” He shot that mug out in front of him once more and everyone lifted their cups, chanting, “We are! We are! We are!”

In the chaos, of people rising to stand, lifting their glasses high, and Lyle chugging the remainder of his ale, Kess slipped out the door. She slipped he left hand in her coat pocket and tightened her fingers around the small brick she carried there.

Edited by Mora, 27 November 2017 - 02:27 AM.

#2 Moru


Posted 26 November 2017 - 10:32 PM

I absolutely love the style you chose for Kess' history! I definitely Accept~!

Just be careful about which words get capitals and which don't. (For example, it's always Allomancy, and never skaa.) see this post under #9 for that list of what is and is not capitalized. :)

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#3 KChan

Atium Chandelier

Posted 28 November 2017 - 12:54 AM

You put a lot of hard work into Kess's app, and it shows! She has great depth of character and you did the intense scenes very well. You're Approved! Welcome!

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