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Guide to using D&D terms in character apps

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#1 Abraxas MacGuile

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Skaa

Posted 01 November 2018 - 05:55 PM

Ok, I said I'd put this up, so here it is: a guide to using d&d terms io character apps. All references are from the Player's Handbook and/or d20SRD.
First off are the explanations for the ability scores, skills, and proficiency. Next explains alignment and how character species/subspecies affects ability scores. Then, an explanation of feats. After that, items are explained.
Please, don't reply to this topic directly - just PM me. Admins and mods, all my character apps will use this, so please leave it up, if only for ease of understanding my apps.
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See you somewhere, somewhen.
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Xeno: Be sure to check AGM out on FFN!
Me: How'd you get here!?
Xeno: Planeswalking. *Pins me to wall with Atavarr's Personal Gravitational Upset.*
Me: You're still mad about what I said!?
Xeno: Yup, but not for much longer. See ya. *Leaves.*
Me: Hey!
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1 Hour Later....
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Alchema: *Arrives, looks at me, and groans.*
Me: Um, mind helping me out here?
Alchema: Sure thing, AGM. *Runs off to find Xeno.*
Me: Where are you go- *Spell wears off. I faceplant.* -OW!

#2 Comatose


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Looking Good in Red

Posted 02 November 2018 - 01:22 PM

Hello Abraxis. I am going to move this, as this section of the boards is just for character applications. Also, since we already have a character application template we will only be accepting characters whose applications are in our standard template.

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#3 Abraxas MacGuile

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Skaa

Posted 02 November 2018 - 03:48 PM

I know. This guide is designed to aid in comparing characters' capabilities via their apps. Thus, modifications to the standard template are optional. These modifications will be in such a format as to not interfere with the standard template, and will be detailed in the last post here. An example is Caedrus' app, except regarding the snippet, which is combined for my first 8 characters. Please PM me about further issues, queries, etc.
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See you somewhere, somewhen.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Xeno: Be sure to check AGM out on FFN!
Me: How'd you get here!?
Xeno: Planeswalking. *Pins me to wall with Atavarr's Personal Gravitational Upset.*
Me: You're still mad about what I said!?
Xeno: Yup, but not for much longer. See ya. *Leaves.*
Me: Hey!
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1 Hour Later....
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Alchema: *Arrives, looks at me, and groans.*
Me: Um, mind helping me out here?
Alchema: Sure thing, AGM. *Runs off to find Xeno.*
Me: Where are you go- *Spell wears off. I faceplant.* -OW!

#4 Abraxas MacGuile

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Skaa

Posted 02 November 2018 - 03:48 PM

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Edited by Abraxas MacGuile, 02 November 2018 - 06:21 PM.

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See you somewhere, somewhen.
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Xeno: Be sure to check AGM out on FFN!
Me: How'd you get here!?
Xeno: Planeswalking. *Pins me to wall with Atavarr's Personal Gravitational Upset.*
Me: You're still mad about what I said!?
Xeno: Yup, but not for much longer. See ya. *Leaves.*
Me: Hey!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
1 Hour Later....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Alchema: *Arrives, looks at me, and groans.*
Me: Um, mind helping me out here?
Alchema: Sure thing, AGM. *Runs off to find Xeno.*
Me: Where are you go- *Spell wears off. I faceplant.* -OW!

#5 Comatose


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355
Looking Good in Red

Posted 02 November 2018 - 09:51 PM

We aren’t really a combat focused role play (as you will are from our story threads). The standard application is designed with that in mind and has suited our purposes thus far but I will take a look when I have the chance.

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#6 KChan

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Lord Prelan

Posted 02 November 2018 - 10:11 PM

Hi Abraxas, and welcome!

You may have missed it, but our FAQ very clearly states that we do not use numbers, stats, or any sort of modifiers in this RP. We are narrative-based only here:

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There's no system, skill points, or dice that we use here. This site is really about interactive storytelling, and we feel it can bog down the story to have dice or skill points. In addition, keeping track of these numbers would be a heavy burden. Such things work better on a tabletop RPG than a forum-wide RP.

As such, please remove all references to the PHB/D20SRD in your apps. Once you have, we'll take a further look at your characters. I'll be posting this reply in your other threads to make sure you and the other staffers see it. Thanks!

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#7 Abraxas MacGuile

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Skaa

Posted 08 November 2018 - 12:20 PM

Comatose: Thanks.
KChan: I get it already!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
See you somewhere, somewhen.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Xeno: Be sure to check AGM out on FFN!
Me: How'd you get here!?
Xeno: Planeswalking. *Pins me to wall with Atavarr's Personal Gravitational Upset.*
Me: You're still mad about what I said!?
Xeno: Yup, but not for much longer. See ya. *Leaves.*
Me: Hey!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
1 Hour Later....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Alchema: *Arrives, looks at me, and groans.*
Me: Um, mind helping me out here?
Alchema: Sure thing, AGM. *Runs off to find Xeno.*
Me: Where are you go- *Spell wears off. I faceplant.* -OW!

#8 Abraxas MacGuile

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Skaa

Posted 08 November 2018 - 06:19 PM

Topic aborted.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
See you somewhere, somewhen.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Xeno: Be sure to check AGM out on FFN!
Me: How'd you get here!?
Xeno: Planeswalking. *Pins me to wall with Atavarr's Personal Gravitational Upset.*
Me: You're still mad about what I said!?
Xeno: Yup, but not for much longer. See ya. *Leaves.*
Me: Hey!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
1 Hour Later....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Alchema: *Arrives, looks at me, and groans.*
Me: Um, mind helping me out here?
Alchema: Sure thing, AGM. *Runs off to find Xeno.*
Me: Where are you go- *Spell wears off. I faceplant.* -OW!





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