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Clarice Estes

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#1 Guest_Clarice Estes_*

Posted 29 May 2009 - 02:19 AM

"Clarice Estes"

Player Information
Handle : Kalub
Contact : [email protected]

Character Information
Name: Clarice Amelia Estes
Age: Twenty-one
Type: Noble
Gender: Female
Occupation: None
Marital Status: Single

Type of Powers: Allomancy
Metals Used: Brass
Degree of Skill: Advanced

Hair: Clarice has tawny brown hair, that falls to her lower back long waves, although she normally wears her hair in an up-do of tight curls.
Eyes: Almond shaped eyes, with deep brown iris?.
Height: 5? 6??
Weight: 110 lbs.
Voice: Clarice has a very smooth sensual voice.
Overall Appearance: Clarice stands almost as tall as the men in her social circle, not in height but in arrogance. She prides herself on being one of the fashion forwards in Luthadel. Clarice has dirty brown hair, that she keeps pulled up away from the face. She is oft seen wearing large floppy hats, and extravagant gowns. She has very prominent eyebrows that she keeps plucked to perfection, and her soft lips are plump. Her complexion is a bit pink, which she tries to hide with pale makeup, giving her a washed out look that is mirrored in her social circle.

Special Skills: Reading, Writing, Lying, and Soothing of course.
Strengths: Clarice is extremely good at what she does. Which is manipulating. She uses her gifts as an Allomancer, and her undeniable charm to bewitch everyone around her. Most people do not even notice her touch on their emotions, because it comes so naturally to her.
Weaknesses: Clarice is a perfect soother for a target, but when applying her gifts to a crowd she is almost useless. Clarice is also useless when it comes to any sort of physical activity. She has lived a sheltered life in Luthadel, and is not about to start getting sweaty for some silly Skaa revolt.

Clarice, like any other Noble girl, is somewhat of a brat. She knows what she wants, and will stop at nothing to get it. Luckily most of the things that matter to the girl are frilly gowns and people to listen to her rambling gossip. Her father and soothing take care of those two things fairly easily. Clarice is also a very stubborn girl. She hates being told what to do by anyone, and will likely do the exact opposite of a direct order just because she is so fully of herself.

Clarice is always in her version of a ?good mood.? She appears to be very poised and perfect on the outside. She always speaks in calm tones, and hardly ever raises her voice. Even when being a complete witch to people, she somehow maintains an innocent tone. Clarice is motivated by mainly one thing, control. She loves to control everyone around her, and ever situation. This is the main reason no young men have tried to court the woman, she is simply too controlling.

Clarice views the Lord Ruler as a good man, and as her God. But nothing more than that. She does not waste away like so many others talking about the man for hours upon end. It is her view that ?he provides a comfortable life? and that is enough for her. The Skaa disgust Clarice, she thinks of them as property. Much like cattle, even the smell.

Clarice was born to one of Luthadel?s High Nobility families. She is ranked high in society because of her father, and was brought up as such. When she was just a small girl, she learn reading, writing, and arithmetic just like all other Noble children. Being the daughter of an over protective father and a very caring mother, she has never spent much time outside of Luthadel, save for one trip to Fadrex when she was very small. She was an awkward child who never really cared for much except to play. She would spend hours upon end playing alone in her quarters of her father?s keep.

When she reached puberty, Clarice blossomed into the young woman that she is today. Her toys and dolls were replaced with dresses and jewelry from the best dressmakers in Luthadel. Clarice was still the sheltered girl that she had always been however, until the day her mother passed away. Clarice?s mother had been her entire life. She had been the only person that Clarice actually cared about. On that day is when Clarice snapped. The emotional trauma too great for her.

From that moment on Clarice spent more time with people, trying to forget about the ache left from her mother?s passing. In that time spend with people, she slowly learned how to control everyone around her. Men were in the palm of her hand, until she became too controlling of them. And the women of the court were like her little pawns. Hanging onto every word that slipped from her lips. She always controlled with her Allomancy, it was her nature.

Clarice still lives in her father?s estate, having her own private quarters on the sixth floor. She attends every ball, always in a new dress. And she spends her days dallying with the other women of the court. Whispering rumors of affairs, drunkards, and from time to time talking about the Skaa revolt secretly going on outside their walls. Luckily she had her father to ease the burden of the outside world. He always was the one who kept her sheltered and safe.

Roleplay Sample

Clarice stepped from the carriage, her glistening lavender gown rustling as she placed her foot upon solid ground. She nodded to the man at her left, and he closed the cabin door behind her. She stepped lightly, making sure every step was perfect as to not trip over the large petticoats of her gown. Large earrings hung from her lobes, a large polished pearl in each.

Her hair was teased to an extreme, piled atop her head in a bed of flowers and curls. Exquisite, as her hairdresser described it. As clicked up the steps, and entered the large ballroom, she quickly took a calming breath, and stepped lightly up the stairs of the foyer. At the top, the announcer said her name, and she quickly reached into the roll of her stomach and burned her brass. She soothed away the man?s boredom and weariness, leaving on excitement and happiness and his voice rang out over the crowd.

?Madam Clarice Amelia Estes, Daughter of Lord Estes.?

She raised a brow slightly as she stepped down the large staircase and into her world.

#2 Miyabi

  • Allomantic Seer


Posted 29 May 2009 - 02:35 AM

I like it. She sounds interesting.

Accepted it!


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