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The Lord Ruler's perfect capital city, Luthadel, is doing the impossible: rebelling. Skaa half-breeds are being taught the power of Allomancy, something that the Lord Ruler's obligators said only existed in the nobility. The enslaved skaa, with their murderous benefactor, now fight back against a living god's oppression.

So, the Inquisition was formed. The nobles begin to fear assassination from all sides. The times of nobility Mistborn killing each other are over. The Steel Inquisitors look for aristocrat traitors and insurgent skaa, and the skaa try with all their strength to merely survive. The Lord Ruler's perfect Final Empire is slowly devolving into chaos.

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In Topic: Rikor-Skaa Rioter

16 January 2019 - 01:52 AM

Thanks for updating the app! Everything seems alright to me now, so I'm glad to say it's an approved from me!

Remember you still need an approval from one of the admins before you can start posting as Rikor :D

In Topic: Rikor-Skaa Rioter

14 January 2019 - 11:33 PM

Hi! I really like Rikor's personality, and personally love the way he uses his Allomancy while fighting.

There's one thing that I'll have to ask you to revise, though. "Many of his physical traits are defined by his zinc deficiency, because of his allomancy." This doesn't really fit into the canon we've seen so far, since Allomancers ingest metal to burn, but they can't burn any metal that has already been metabolized by their bodies. Because of this, Allomancy couldn't have caused Rikor's zinc deficiency. What makes this detail really important is its influence on Rikor's physique. Maybe he's malnourished or has a vitamin deficiency because he's skaa?

Aside from the zinc deficiency detail, I really like this app, though I'll have to hold the approval until that's changed. If you need to anything, feel free to PM me on Discord!